Exercise #1
a. Researchers suggest that there are dangerous levels of Chemical X in the Ohio groundwater.
b. Book reviews have stated that this novel has certain flaws.
c. Fans of hockey find football is so boring.
d. Educators have found that male students often dominate class discussions.
e. Movie critics feel that the film is really about the problems of romantic relationships not that of how great it is to be in love.
f. Readers feel that templates like the ones in this book will stifle their creativity.
Exercise #2
If there ever was a custom made idea for a Jay Leno monologue, this was it: movie directors being more concerned with the amount of money made versus the strength of the story they portray. Isn't that like say the money equals power and art equals the poorhouse. Whatever happened to the film industry being about the art that is on the screen and not the money that goes into our pockets. I happen to sympathize with those artists that truly are in it for the art versus the money,though perhaps that is because I am a self-proclaimed starving artist that is always looking to put the message above the money. Always trying to do my best to remember that the art not others opinions is what counts.
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"Fans of hockey find football is so boring." This was a great example of the exercise...
ReplyDeleteI'm sure Jay Leno would love the starving artist monologue.
I thought that your responses for exercise one were very creative and showed that you knew what you were doing. I really liked what you said for the Jay Leno monologue. I especially like your last line too. Good work!
ReplyDeleteExercise one was done very well.
ReplyDelete"e. Movie critics feel that the film is really about the problems of romantic relationships not that of how great it is to be in love."
I really enjoyed this one.^^
and your Jay Leno monologue was awesome. I wish more people had the mind set you do.